๐Ÿšจ ์ด ์š”์ฒญ์€ ๋ด‡(Bot) ๋˜๋Š” ํฌ๋กค๋Ÿฌ๋กœ ํŒ๋‹จ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ† ์ต ์‹œํ—˜ ๋ฐฉ์‹ ํ† ์ต๊ณผ IELTS ๋น„๊ต : ํ† ์ต ๋ฌธ์ œ #84

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์˜ค๋‹ต์„ ์ค„์ด๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ํ’€ ๋•Œ ์ •๋‹ต์˜
๊ทผ๊ฑฐ๋ฅผ ์ง€๋ฌธ์—์„œ ํ™•์‹คํžˆ ํ™•์ธํ•˜์„ธ์š” ์‹œํ—˜

ํ† ์ต ์‹œํ—˜ ๋ฐฉ์‹ ํ† ์ต๊ณผ IELTS ๋น„๊ต : ํ† ์ต ๋ฌธ์ œ #84

๋‹น์ผ์—๋Š” ์ง€๋‚˜์น˜๊ฒŒ ๊ธด์žฅํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋„๋ก ํ‰์†Œ
์—ฐ์Šตํ•œ ๋ฐฉ์‹๋Œ€๋กœ ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ํ‘ธ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์‹œํ—˜์ด

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๋๋‚œ ํ›„์—๋Š” ์„ฑ์ ์ด ๋‚˜์˜ค๊ธฐ ์ „๊นŒ์ง€ ํ‹€๋ฆฐ ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ๋‹ค์‹œ
ํ’€์–ด๋ณด๊ณ , ์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ๋ฐ˜๋ณตํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋„๋ก ๋ถ„์„ํ•˜์„ธ์š” ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ์ด์Šˆ๋ฅผ

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ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•  ๋•Œ๋Š” ๋ฌธ์žฅ ๋‚ด ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์  ๋‹จ์„œ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ๋Š”
์—ฐ์Šต์„ ํ•˜์„ธ์š” ์‹œํ—˜ ์ „๋‚ ์—๋Š” ๋ฌด๋ฆฌํ•œ
ํ•™์Šต์„ ํ”ผํ•˜๊ณ , ๊ฐ€๋ณ๊ฒŒ ๋‹จ์–ด ๋ณต์Šต์„ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
์‹œํ—˜ ์ค‘ ๋ณต์žกํ•œ ๊ณผ์ œ๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋‚˜๋ฉด ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ๋‚ญ๋น„ํ•˜์ง€

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๋•Œ ๋‹จ์ˆœ ์•”๊ธฐ๋ณด๋‹ค ์‹ค์ „ ์ ์šฉ ์—ฐ์Šต์ด ๋” ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค

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๋ฌด๋ฆฌํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๊ฒƒ์„ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜๊ธฐ๋ณด๋‹ค, ๊ธฐ์กด์— ๋ฐฐ์šด
๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ๋ณต์Šตํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์‹œํ—˜ ์ค‘ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด
๋ถ€์กฑํ•  ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ๋ณต์žกํ•œ ๊ณผ์ œ๋ฅผ ๋‚จ๊ฒจ๋‘๊ณ  ์‰ฌ์šด ๊ณผ์ œ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•˜์„ธ์š”
์‹œํ—˜ ์ค‘ ์ž์‹ ์ด ํ‘ผ ๊ณผ์ œ๋ฅผ ์†๋„๋ฅผ ๋‚ด์–ด

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๊ฒ€ํ† ํ•˜๊ณ , ์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์ค„์ด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ ์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ๋†’์ด๋Š” ํ•ต์‹ฌ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
์‹œํ—˜ ์ค‘ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ๋ถ€์กฑํ•  ๊ฒฝ์šฐ, ํ™•์‹ ์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ์งˆ๋ฌธ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ

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ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์ผ์ •ํ•œ ์ฃผ๊ธฐ๋กœ
๊ธฐ์ถœ ์ด์Šˆ๋ฅผ ํ’€๋ฉฐ, ๊ฐ๊ฐ์„ ์œ ์ง€ํ•˜๋Š”

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๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค


ํ† ์ต ๋ฌธ์ œ #84

์ƒํ™ฉ ์„ค๋ช… ๋ฌธ์ œ
The customer requested a refund for the defective item.
      Q: What did the customer want?
      A. A replacement
      B. A refund
      C. A discount
      D. An apology
     
๊ณ ๊ฐ์€ ๋ถˆ๋Ÿ‰ ์ œํ’ˆ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ํ™˜๋ถˆ์„ ์š”์ฒญํ•˜์˜€์œผ๋ฏ€๋กœ ๋‹ต์€ B์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
์„ธ๋ถ€ ์˜ˆ์‹œ ๋ฌธ์ œ
The article provides examples of companies that successfully implemented employee wellness programs.
     Q: What does the article provide examples of?
     A. Companies with wellness programs
     B. Companies with low turnover
     C. Companies that downsized
     D. Companies with high revenue
     
๊ธฐ์‚ฌ๋Š” ๋ณต์ง€ ํ”„๋กœ๊ทธ๋žจ์„ ์„ฑ๊ณต์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋„์ž…ํ•œ ํšŒ์‚ฌ๋“ค์˜ ์˜ˆ์‹œ๋ฅผ ์ œ๊ณตํ•˜๋ฏ€๋กœ ๋‹ต์€ A์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
๋ฌธ์žฅ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ ๋ฌธ์ œ
The team finished the project early. Therefore, they received a bonus.
     Q: Which connector best fits between the two sentences?
     A. Therefore
     B. However
     C. And
     D. But
     
๋‘ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์€ ์›์ธ๊ณผ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋ฏ€๋กœ "๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ"๊ฐ€ ์ ํ•ฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ต์€ A์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ ์ง„ํ–‰
The project is currently on schedule.
      Q: What is the status of the project?
      A. Behind schedule
      B. Ahead of schedule
      C. On schedule
      D. Canceled
     
ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ๋Š” ํ˜„์žฌ ์˜ˆ์ •๋Œ€๋กœ ์ง„ํ–‰๋˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ•˜์˜€์œผ๋ฏ€๋กœ ๋‹ต์€ C์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
๊ฐœ์š” ์ž‘์„ฑ ๋ฌธ์ œ
The article covers the challenges faced by businesses in the global market.
     Q: What does the article cover?
     A. Challenges in the global market
     B. Marketing strategies
     C. Employee satisfaction
     D. Financial planning
     
์ด ๊ธฐ์‚ฌ๋Š” ๊ธ€๋กœ๋ฒŒ ์‹œ์žฅ์—์„œ ๊ธฐ์—…๋“ค์ด ์ง๋ฉดํ•œ ๋„์ „ ๊ณผ์ œ๋ฅผ ๋‹ค๋ฃจ๊ณ  ์žˆ์œผ๋ฏ€๋กœ ๋‹ต์€ A์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
ํœด๊ฐ€ ์‹ ์ฒญ
I would like to request a day off next Friday.
      Q: When is the speaker requesting a day off?
      A. Next Friday
      B. Tomorrow
      C. Next Monday
      D. Next Wednesday
     
์—ฐ์„ค์ž๋Š” ๋‹ค์Œ ์ฃผ ๊ธˆ์š”์ผ์— ํœด๊ฐ€๋ฅผ ์š”์ฒญํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ•˜์˜€์œผ๋ฏ€๋กœ ๋‹ต์€ A์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
์–ด๊ตฌ/๊ตฌ๋ฌธ ์™„์„ฑ ๋ฌธ์ œ
The team is planning to ____ the new system next month.
     A. implement
     B. implementing
     C. implemented
     D. implements
     
๋นˆ์นธ์—๋Š” ๋™์‚ฌ์˜ ์›ํ˜•์ธ "implement"๊ฐ€ ์ ํ•ฉํ•˜๋ฏ€๋กœ ๋‹ต์€ A์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
๋ฌธ์žฅ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ ๋ฌธ์ œ
The project was completed on time. As a result, the team received a bonus.
     Q: Which connector best fits between the two sentences?
     A. Therefore
     B. However
     C. And
     D. Or
     
๋‘ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์€ ์›์ธ๊ณผ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋ฏ€๋กœ "๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ"๊ฐ€ ์ ํ•ฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ต์€ A์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
๋ฐฉ์†ก ๋‚ด์šฉ ํŒŒ์•… ๋ฌธ์ œ
Broadcast: The company will launch a new product next month, and it will be available in stores.
     Q: What will the company do next month?
     A. Launch a new product
     B. Close its stores
     C. Hire new employees
     D. Increase its prices
     
๋ฐฉ์†ก์—์„œ ํšŒ์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ์ œํ’ˆ์„ ์ถœ์‹œํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์–ธ๊ธ‰ํ•˜์˜€์œผ๋ฏ€๋กœ ๋‹ต์€ A์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
๊ฐœ์š” ์ž‘์„ฑ ๋ฌธ์ œ
The article discusses the importance of time management for employees.
     Q: What does the article cover?
     A. Time management
     B. Employee benefits
     C. Office design
     D. Marketing strategies
     
์ด ๊ธฐ์‚ฌ๋Š” ์ง์›๋“ค์˜ ์‹œ๊ฐ„ ๊ด€๋ฆฌ ์ค‘์š”์„ฑ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋‹ค๋ฃจ๊ณ  ์žˆ์œผ๋ฏ€๋กœ ๋‹ต์€ A์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

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